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Aide correction texte anglais

Dernière réponse : dans Etudes - Travail
27 Mai 2010 09:36:03

Bonjour,

Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider pour la correction de deux textes en anglais.

Voici ces textes ci-dessous :

1er texte :

Michael Lauderdale realized a study about burnout. He is the Director of the University of Texas School, and he studies in social work. I can read that teachers and full-time housewives are groups that they suffer from burnout, but everyone can be affected. When you are on burnout, you are without energy and without pleasure. In fact, we live in a difficult period with family, social environment and job. The time changes and we should necessary adapted with this new life’s style.

Further-more, Mr. Lauderdale says that there are three different periods in burnout, they are confusion, moderate burnout and despair, with various aspects of the disease. He explains that there are different methods to help people to avoid burnout. To have a way of live in witch we can have recreation and a time for us. For example, going to a spectacle or to hairdresser.

More, Mr. Lauderdale writes that men are more affected than women, but essentially in their jobs.

2ème texte :

Hi my friend,

I write this letter, because I know that you are sick actually. I learned that you are on burnout.

I hope you understand that this disease is not a drama, but it is important that you sleep enough and that you take some rest.

I don’t know why you are on burnout. Is it with your life’s family or with your job. Do you see a doctor ? Do you take some pills ?

If I can give you some advices, I want to say you that the burnout is the illness of the century. I think that you will be able to find some help to your doctor or a psychologist. But, if it is a problem with your job, you have another solution too. It is possible to meet a coach. I think that it is a good answer and he can help you towards your job. I know that some enterprises use an adviser when there are some difficulties with their employees. I hope that you can talk with your employers to find some helps.

I know that I don’t understand all about this illness, but I want to give some supports and I want to say to you that I am here for you. If you want to talk with me, it is a pleasure for me.

Take care my friend.

Merci pour votre aide.

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28 Mai 2010 00:19:33

Nath0211 a dit :
Bonjour,

Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider pour la correction de deux textes en anglais.

Voici ces textes ci-dessous :

1er texte :

Michael Lauderdale realized a study about burnout. He is the Director of the University of Texas School, and he studies in social work. I can read that teachers and full-time housewives are groups that they suffer from burnout, but everyone can be affected. When you are on burnout, you are without energy and without pleasure. In fact, we live in a difficult period with family, social environment and job. The time changes and we should necessary adapted with this new life’s style. (1)

Furthermore, Mr. Lauderdale says that there are three different periods in burnout, they are confusion, moderate burnout and despair, with various aspects of the disease. He explains that there are different methods to help people to avoid burnout. To have a way of life in witch we can have recreation and a time for us. For example, going to a spectacle show or to the hairdresser.

More, Mr. Lauderdale writes that men are more affected than women, but essentially in their jobs.

2ème texte :

Hi my friend,

I write this letter, because I know that you are sick actually at the moment. I learned that you are on burnout.

I hope you understand that this disease is not a drama, but it is important that you sleep enough and that you take some rest.

I don’t know why you are on burnout. Is it with because of your life’s family or with your job. Do you see a doctor ? Do you take some pills ?

If I can give you some advice, I want to say you that the burnout is the illness of the century. I think that you will be able to find some help from your doctor or a psychologist. But, if it is a problem with your job, you have another solution too. It is possible to meet a coach. I think that it is a good answer and he can help you towards with your job. I know that some enterprises use an adviser when there are some difficulties with their employees. I hope that you can talk with your employers to find some help.

I know that I don’t understand all everythig about this illness, but I want to give some support and I want to say to tell you that I am here for you. If you want to talk with me, it is a pleasure for me.

Take care my friend.

Merci pour votre aide.

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28 Mai 2010 09:11:02

Bonjour,

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide... C'est très sympa d'avoir faire les corrections nécessaires.
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8 Juin 2010 15:34:13

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2 Août 2011 22:47:34

Bonsoir !
J'ai un travail de vacance en anglais pour lequel je dois résumer 4textes en anglais. Pour le réussir au mieux, est il possible que quelqu'un le corrige ? Merci beaucoup !
Voici le premier.

Francais:

Bien que certains américains gardent des appréhensions concernant la peine de mort. celle ci est toujours de mise dans beaucoup d’états..
Cependant suite a plusieurs annulation d’exécution comme celle de Willaim Castiollo. Celui ci fut innocenté juste avant son exécution grâce a un test ADN. la peine capitale crée débat d'un point de vue de la égalité de cette pratique qui consiste a injecter un produit puis un second ainsi qu’un troisième pour masqué les effets des deux premiers. celui ci donnant l’impression que le prisonnier ne souffre pas. C’est pourquoi des procès on été ouverts au Texas et au Kentucky. ceux ci demandent une reforme de la loi concernant l’application de cette peine ainsi qu’un élargissement de celle-ci aux récidivistes et pédophiles. Jusqu'à ce que cette reforme soit prise, toute les peines de mort sont suspendues.
D'autre part Anita Dunn soutenue par le gouverneur républicain de l'Illinois demande l'abolition de cette peine.

Anglais:

Although lots of Americans retain some misgivings about the death penalty. It is still appropriate in many states.
However following more cancellations like William Castillo that he had been cleared just before his excution, creates debate about the legality of this practic, which involves injecting a product and then a second and a third to hide the effects of the first two giving the impression that the prisoner does not suffer.. Therefore Some cases have been opened in Texas and Kentucky. they demand a reform of the law on the application of capital punishment and a elagant of this one torecidivistent and pedophiles. Until this reform, all death penalty is suspended.
Moreover Anita Dunn supported by the Republican governor of Illinois called for the abolition of the death penalty.
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