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30 Avril 2010 21:04:48

Bonjour, j’ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur Mozart. Pourriez-vous me corriger mes fautes. Thank you very much.

(In fact in class we must do a text on a european country (anybody don't has the same) and a famous person of this country. In the end we must present the character in front the class then we vote for the one who can represent a new university.)

Mozart was a prolific and influential musician and a composer of the classical era, he composed 626works.
Biography:
He was born in Salzburg, January 27th 1756 to Leopold a court orchestra's deputy and Anna Maria Perlt Mozart. He died in Vienna December 5th 1791, he was 35. He had a prodigious talent from 3 years and he knew how to decipher a partita before to know how to read to count or to read. Very young he composed five pieces for piano that are very famous.
In 1763, his family left for a first tour in the Europe capitals. Left in seven he came home at 11. In 1769, he left with his father in Italy. In Milan, the opera of La Scala showed two of his works. Mozart searched then a steady job in a European’s court. He wanted given lessons for be alive. In 1782, he composed “abduction from the seraglio” and he married Constance Weber. However, the poverty and the disease touched the couple. He felt seriously ill end died.
Why I chose Mozart:
- In my opinion Mozart should be chosen because the music today owes him a lot. He was one most Grand Master of the opera and a virtuoso of the piano and the violin. It’s one of the main representative of the classical style. In 1791, he composed “the magic flute”
- I have chosen him because to me he could well represent new universities as he carried in a point of perfection the concerto the symphony and sonata and universities must be perfect.
- He lived in many countries and he travelled through Europe. He speaks German, French, Italian and has rudiments in English and Latin. That’s why he has a connection with a lot of European nationality.

What ’s more, everybody knows him.

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1 Mai 2010 11:08:32
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bamb09_11 a dit :
Bonjour, j’ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur Mozart. Pourriez-vous me corriger mes fautes. Thank you very much.

(In fact in class we must do a text on a european country (anybody don't has the same) and a famous person of this country. In the end we must present the character in front the class then we vote for the one who can represent a new university.)

Mozart was a prolific and influential musician and a composer of the classical era, he composed 626works.
Biography:
He was born in Salzburg,on January 27th 1756, to Leopold, a court orchestra's deputy, and Anna Maria Perlt Mozart. He died in Vienna on December 5th 1791, he was 35. He had a prodigious talent from the time he was 3 and he knew how to decipher a partita before he knew how to read or to count. Very young, he composed five pieces for piano that are very famous.
In 1763, his family left for a first tour in the Europe capitals. Left in seven he came home at 11 (phrase a revoir, ne veux rien dire). In 1769, he left with his father in Italy. In Milan, the opera of La Scala showed two of his works. Mozart then searched for a steady job in a European court. He wanted to give lessons for a living. In 1782, he composed “abduction from the seraglio” and he married Constance Weber. However, the poverty and the disease touched the couple. He fell seriously ill end died.
Why I chose Mozart:
- In my opinion Mozart should be chosen because the music today owes a lot to him. He was one most Grand Master of the opera and a virtuoso of the piano and the violin. It’s one of the main representatives of the classical style. In 1791, he composed “the magic flute”
- I have chosen him because to me he could well represent new universities as he carried in a point of perfection the concerto the symphony and sonata and universities must be perfect.
- He lived in many countries and he travelled through Europe. He spoke German, French, Italian and had rudiments in English and Latin. That’s why he has a connection with a lot of European nationality. (phrase a mettre au passe: Mozart est mort)

What ’s more, everybody knows him.



Voila ;) 
La phrase soulignee est a revoir entierement: elle ne veux rien dire.
1 Mai 2010 14:52:24

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1 Mai 2010 17:01:03

thank you very much
2 Août 2011 22:48:59

Bonsoir !
J'ai un travail de vacance en anglais pour lequel je dois résumer 4textes en anglais. Pour le réussir au mieux, est il possible que quelqu'un le corrige ? Merci beaucoup !
Voici le premier.

Francais:

Bien que certains américains gardent des appréhensions concernant la peine de mort. celle ci est toujours de mise dans beaucoup d’états..
Cependant suite a plusieurs annulation d’exécution comme celle de Willaim Castiollo. Celui ci fut innocenté juste avant son exécution grâce a un test ADN. la peine capitale crée débat d'un point de vue de la égalité de cette pratique qui consiste a injecter un produit puis un second ainsi qu’un troisième pour masqué les effets des deux premiers. celui ci donnant l’impression que le prisonnier ne souffre pas. C’est pourquoi des procès on été ouverts au Texas et au Kentucky. ceux ci demandent une reforme de la loi concernant l’application de cette peine ainsi qu’un élargissement de celle-ci aux récidivistes et pédophiles. Jusqu'à ce que cette reforme soit prise, toute les peines de mort sont suspendues.
D'autre part Anita Dunn soutenue par le gouverneur républicain de l'Illinois demande l'abolition de cette peine.

Anglais:

Although lots of Americans retain some misgivings about the death penalty. It is still appropriate in many states.
However following more cancellations like William Castillo that he had been cleared just before his excution, creates debate about the legality of this practic, which involves injecting a product and then a second and a third to hide the effects of the first two giving the impression that the prisoner does not suffer.. Therefore Some cases have been opened in Texas and Kentucky. they demand a reform of the law on the application of capital punishment and a elagant of this one torecidivistent and pedophiles. Until this reform, all death penalty is suspended.
Moreover Anita Dunn supported by the Republican governor of Illinois called for the abolition of the death penalty.
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